Embers Ad Infinitum

I haven’t written a summary for a long time, my hands are a bit raw, laugh.

"Emperor" in the fourth part mainly has two meanings. One is to represent the last words of the former "Primordial City" Emperor Aure, which is also the main task of the "Old Tune Team". The other is to refer to "power", which refers to "original". "City" rights change.

In addition, I am also trying to use different characters to represent different musical instruments. They come from all directions, merge into the most intense movement, and then go away one by one, leaving only the instruments representing the protagonists to play out the lingering sound and render the scene. out of the feeling of loneliness.

This kind of writing inevitably requires new characters, good shaping, and a progressive progression of the original characters.

To this end, I wrote about the arrogant "Priest", General Phocas who looks like a lion but has a fox inside, the compassionate Zenaga, the happy-go-lucky Garolan, the ambitious Gaius, and the lust-addicted Assus. Zeng Duo, who is running around his hometown and forgetting himself, wait, wait.

At the same time, Xiaohong ignites her courage, Lao Han understands the meaning of love, Xiaobai's past is fully revealed and his current determination, Dabai begins to face his own fears, and Shang Jianyao takes another step on the road to mental illness. Taking a solid step forward, Laoge slowly understood the meaning of the word emotional intelligence. These all belong to the development trajectory of the characters, making their images more layered.

At this point, I feel that I have achieved my intended purpose.

The main problems lie in six points:

First, when I first arrive in a big place, and it is a place where I will be active for a long time, I am always used to cutting in from the corners to show the characters and cultural customs here, and then bring out the characters little by little, The events are outlined bit by bit, which results in a slow pace in the early stages. For some friends, the reading experience may not be very good.

The second is also a matter of rhythm. As I said in this book, there will be upgrades, but I will try to weaken the help of upgrades to the rhythm. Therefore, in the whole book, Shang Jianyao only improved once. From the expectation that he will become stronger, I will From the perspective of readers with more changes, this rhythm is indeed not very friendly. For this reason, when I first set up the settings, I made "props" similar to magical items. I hope that changes can be reflected through the acquisition and consumption of props, so that the focus of the story can be more focused on the advancement of the plot.

The third is fighting. How should I put it? Every fight involving awakened people consumes my brain power. It is more difficult than writing about boxing, kicking, Taoism, magic, etc., so it is easy for polarization to occur: when certain abilities are no longer When it appears once, I will definitely explain it completely in order to prevent everyone from being confused. The fighting will appear long-winded and suitable for watching in one breath, and I don’t have the ability to write so much in one breath; when certain abilities have already been The second or even third time around, when the focus is on a battle of wits and courage, it works well, being both fun and intense.

The fourth is the lack of tension. When no one of the main characters dies, it is indeed a bit difficult to create tension in the story. Without tension, it will not be exciting enough and there will be no big climax. To solve this problem, we can't just die for the sake of dying. People will die naturally when they deserve to die. I will try to use "failure" to create a corresponding atmosphere in the future. In other words, not every mission can be successful.

Fifth, the change of power in "Prime City" this time is because the protagonist group is only playing soy sauce on the edge, so I regard it more as a stage to elicit more deeper secrets of the setting and to shape the characters, rather than as a trigger for the climax. point, which creates a certain misalignment with readers’ expectations.

Sixth, some suspense settings were delayed too long, resulting in a lack of enough shock when decrypting.

The above is a summary of the fourth part. The fifth part is "Heroes", named after Beethoven's Third Symphony. From the name, you should be able to guess that the fifth part will have "Salvation Army" related content.

Okay, it’s time for me to ask for leave the most. Well, today is Saturday. It’s only one update, so it doesn’t count. Please take Sunday, Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday morning, a total of three and a half days, and resume next Wednesday at 7 p.m. renew.

Thinking about it carefully, I was supposed to take half a day off on Sunday, but it was included in the total leave, which is equivalent to only taking three days off. You made a profit and I lost! (Mr. Ma’s face)

Fortunately, since a single chapter has been issued, wouldn’t it be a waste if I didn’t ask for votes?

Asking for a monthly ticket!