God Descends the Second Element

In ancient times, there was Liu Xiahui who was calm in his arms, and Wang Hao thought he could not reach that level, but after looking at Zhenbai's peaceful eyes, the impetuousness in his heart disappeared miraculously, leaving only a touch of warmth.

Faced with the temptation in front of him, Wang Hao finally failed to choose to turn into a wolf between beasts and beasts, so he quietly admired the manuscript in his hand.

...

Five minutes passed, and after quietly reading Zhenbai's original manuscript, Wang Hao's face became weird, and he finally understood why, as Shiina Zhenbai's world-class painter, the submission was still returned.

"You should know the reason yourself."

Putting down the manuscript, Wang Hao asked straightforwardly, believing that Mashiro Shiina knew this question himself.

"Well, the plot is really boring..."

Nodding in disappointment, just as Wang Hao thought, Shiina Mashiro himself already knew the reason. He has submitted many papers from the beginning to now, but none of them passed. Iida Ayano also raised this kind of question.

Although Shiina Mashiro lacks common sense, he still has his own opinions in his heart. Even a genius will have the same things as ordinary people.

"The plot is really boring. It can be said to be a completely brainless plot. There are too many things that people don't understand. It can make readers go crazy."

Wang Hao said bluntly, since he decided to teach Zhenbai to learn manga, he should clearly point out the shortcomings to the other party.

"Um……"

Shiina Zhenbai only said this sentence, and her mood was obviously depressed. Of course, she couldn't bear to criticize a girl like this, but white lies would only make Zhenbai go further and further down the wrong path, so Wang Hao decided to tell the truth.

"First of all, let's talk about the style of painting. You have portrayed every character so perfectly that you can hardly find any flaws. The appearance of any random passer-by can be compared to the protagonist. The most important thing is that the characters are too peaceful. ! Not only the male lead has a peaceful personality, but other characters including the male lead’s love rival have become popular. Although this is just a cartoon, it’s really too boring to rely on this setting where all the characters have the same personality.”

The character of the protagonist in comics is very important. No matter what kind of characters in the comics, they all have their own unique personalities, such as optimism, black belly, arrogant, passionate, etc. It is the unique personality that endows the characters with souls, allowing readers to read more. A clear understanding of the nature of manga.

However, Shiina Mashiro's comics have a setting that is impossible to see in other comics. All characters have the same personality, and it is impossible to reflect the strong personal charm of the comic characters.

His tone paused, and he got up from the chair. Wang Hao walked to the other side of the bed and sat down. The person who happened to be facing each other could look directly at Shiina Mashiro, and continued to speak.

"Then there is the most important plot. Your comic content is simply belittling everyone! After all, a rival in love appeared, why did he disappear inexplicably after just appearing on the stage? Even the cute pet dog was not spared, could it be Because it is the pet of a rival in love, should it disappear as a matter of course?! And please don’t underestimate love, how can there be such a smooth love in the world, even if it is fictional!”

Wang Hao said what he wanted to say in one breath, and he also noticed that his tone was a little excited, but Zhenbai disappointed him in terms of plot.

As a cartoonist, Shiina Mashiro can be said that apart from the artist, he is not even a newcomer in other aspects. If it is divided into four test papers, he will give the artist a full score of 100 points without hesitation. As for the other three There is absolutely no exception for the papers, all of which are zero points.

On a comprehensive average, an average of 60 points in each subject is regarded as a just-qualified manga artist, while Mashiro's average is only 25 points in each subject, and these scores are all obtained by drawing.

It really disappointed him, but Wang Hao did not continue to criticize. After all, Zhenbai still lacks a lot of life experience in life, and he is almost a piece of blank paper without the slightest trace.

"sorry."

Shiina Mashiro's current voice is still as flat as water, and it's hard to find the loss if you don't listen carefully.

But Wang Hao still noticed it, and sighed lightly. It seems that what he just said was a bit too much.

"Don't worry about the aspects I mentioned just now, I will teach you slowly."

The reason why Wang Hao mentioned the shortcomings just now is to let Zhenbai understand the shortcomings of being a cartoonist, but it seems that he has noticed these a long time ago, and he is very relieved that he has no rebuttal attitude.

On the other hand, Shiina Mashiro is a talented painter after all, but he is a man without a trace of arrogance.

"Then please teach me how to shape the characters and how to create the plot, please!"

Mashiro raised his lowered head, with a more serious look on his little face, and earnestly begged.

"Well, even if you suddenly say that..."

Wang Hao said with some embarrassment that if the teaching just now was really going to be put into practice, he didn't know where to start for a while, and it was obviously impossible for Zhenbai to regain common sense all of a sudden.

All cartoonists have come one step at a time, and it is impossible for Wang Hao to reap success without paying. He has modified both 5 Centimeters per Second and Dragon Ball. From the moment he set the goal of creating a two-dimensional empire, he began to work on it. Make an effort silently.

For example, there are a lot of relevant materials in the room, which are books related to the production of games, comics, and animations. He often reads them when he is free, and now he has learned a lot of new knowledge.

The topic is a bit far-fetched, but what I want to express is to rely on accumulated efforts to slowly approach the goal.

In the manga industry, many people who are honored as "teachers" basically started as someone else's manga assistant. They worked for several years and gradually learned various knowledge before attempting to make their debut.

Wait... manga assistant? !

"Now I have a work that is very suitable for Zhenbai. It is the work I am creating. The name is "5 Centimeters Per Second". Your painting style fully meets the requirements. Just follow the development of the plot above, so that you can accumulate some experience! You What do you think?"

Wang Hao clapped his hands excitedly. The second five background picture created by Zhenbai last time, the beautiful and touching style of painting is still unforgettable to him.

At the beginning, he didn't think about making comics for Second Five, because it is difficult for Five Centimeters Per Second to express the touchingness of novels in pictures, especially as a comic, which requires the extreme style of cartoonists, so He just dropped the idea, or didn't think about it at all.

But "5 Centimeters Per Second" seems to be a tailor-made work for Shiina Mashiro. With the magnificent painting style combined with the depressing plot, Wang Hao's eyes have already seen the ending...