God Descends the Second Element

"Although there are still some problems, it is much better than before."

Looking at Sawamura Eili's expression, Wang Hao couldn't help but feel a little unbearable. He was very aware of the other party's silent efforts these days.

Thinking of this, he couldn't help but stretched out his hand to touch Sawamura Eili's little head, and comforted: "You have worked really hard. In fact, as long as this comic is revised, there won't be much of a problem, at least it won't be serialized. question."

"Really?!"

Hearing this, Eli Sawamura asked excitedly, and did not show any dissatisfaction with Wang Hao's move of touching his head. Now his heart is focused on the topic of the comic series.

Wang Hao nodded and replied: "Really, if you don't mind, I can express my opinion."

"Yeah! If you have something to say, just say it. Don't stop in the middle of saying it!"

Eli Sawamura rolled her eyes at him and said slightly anxiously, doesn't this guy know that it's easy to get beaten if he goes out to prey on other people's appetites like this?

"It's my fault."

Wang Hao couldn't help but rant. After taking a deep breath, he resisted the urge to continue rant and said directly: "You handled this comic well in the front, but there are a lot of unreasonable things in the back. , for example, why did the super-beautiful transfer student suddenly and inexplicably become interested in the protagonist?

Didn't you say before in the manga that Yanagawa Saki has a very gentle and generous attitude towards others? Other than that, he has not gone beyond the boundaries. It can be seen that this person is quite mature and steady. He is not bad at first, but unexpectedly She suddenly became interested in the protagonist in the next second, and then the youth romantic comedy unfolded. I really didn't know what to complain about.

That's all, but the plot that can be seen at a glance is a bit boring. I think you plan to follow the plot of the romantic comedy Shura Field in the future, right? "

"Um……"

This time, Lily Sawamura's face turned uglier every time she heard Wang Hao's words. She really planned to follow the plot of the romantic comedy Shura Field.

Father, like son.

Eli Sawamura was not angry at Wang Hao's words, but at herself. What the other party said was something she hadn't noticed before, so it sounded like there were a lot of problems.

Seeing that Eli Sawamura could accept her opinions well, Wang Hao's face relaxed. He would be really disappointed if the other party couldn't even accept her opinions to this extent.

However, Wang Hao was still very satisfied with the other party's attitude and continued: "I think you can change it this way. Yanagawa's early interest in the protagonist is okay, but it must be based on a special accidental event. For example, although Yanagawa Saki appears to be a beautiful girl with a gentle and generous personality in school, there is another side that is unknown to the public. For example, Yanagawa Saki is actually a person who likes to have a vicious tongue and a dark belly, or is a dead nerd, etc. wait.

But the protagonist discovers the secret of Yanagawa Saki by chance, and for this reason, the protagonist is targeted by Yanagawa Saki. The following plot can be as funny as usual, but it makes readers feel stomachache when smiling. I couldn’t help but continue reading the content. "

After hearing Wang Hao's words, Lily Sawamura suddenly understood and smiled happily: "I see, I understand! Thank you!"

"It's okay. In fact, you can find it if you spend a little more time."

Wang Hao gave up, but Eli Sawamura did not wait for him to continue: "Just accept it now, I will continue drawing comics first, you are really a good person, thank you!"

As soon as she finished speaking, Sawamura Eiri turned around and left with a slightly red face, leaving Wang Hao with a strange look on his face. Suddenly and inexplicably received a good guy card?

Although he felt that he was barely a good person, the feeling of being given a good person card was really not good.

Forget it, good people are good people.

Wang Hao smiled bitterly, turned around and looked at the scenery outside the window, feeling slightly absent-minded. He was also a little tired from dealing with things these days. Let's go out for a walk next, right?

With this idea in his mind, Wang Hao immediately stood up from the chair, moved his body on the spot, and was ready to set off immediately.

It's still early, so it's time to go for a walk.

This time he planned to take a walk around the area to enjoy Lily Sawamura. For so long, Wang Hao found that he had never been there to appreciate it.

After changing his shoes at the entrance, Wang Hao was about to go out when he found that his sleeve at the back was suddenly pulled.

This sense of familiarity eliminates the need to guess.

Wang Hao sighed in his heart, turned around helplessly, looked at the expressionless Shiina Mashiro, stretched out his hand to rub his head, and asked: "Mashiro, is something okay?"

"Hao, the room is a bit stuffy. I want to go out and play."

Shiina Mashiro said softly, and tugged on Wang Hao's sleeve with her little hand. Her amber eyes blinked slightly, which was quite cute. Who can resist this? !

No, this is not a show of cuteness, but the existence of Zhenbai itself is cute. At least Wang Hao can withstand it...that's weird.

Moreover, Mashiro was obviously bored at home, and he had not noticed this at all before. Wang Hao was still very guilty about this, so he did not hesitate, looked at the other party with a smile, and said: "Okay, where does Mashiro want to go? "

Well, he made up his mind. No matter where Mashiro wanted to go later, he would accompany her out. This is as a pet owner... Bah, bah, bah, no, it should be what a guardian should do!

"I want to go to England to see Rita."

Shiina Mashiro said softly, with a slight fluctuation in the expression on her face.

Wang Hao replied subconsciously without thinking: "No problem, then go to England to see Rita!"

As soon as he said the words, Wang Hao suddenly felt something strange. What did he just say?

Just in case, Wang Hao smiled and confirmed with Mashiro Shiina: "Mashiro, where did you say you wanted to go just now?"

Hearing this, Shiina Mashiro didn't think much and continued: "Hao, I want to go to England to see Rita."

Wang Hao: “??????”

If he heard correctly, Mashiro seemed to have said he wanted to go to England just now, right?

Wang Hao sometimes really doesn't adapt to Mashiro's frequent and unconstrained thinking.

Wang Hao looked at Mashiro's plain expression with expectation, and couldn't say what he originally wanted to say, and finally turned into a wry smile.

Again, who can withstand this? !

Anyway, it's strange that he can withstand it...

When you go to England, just go to England, just think of it as going out to relax.

Thinking of this, Wang Hao shook his head helplessly, looked at Shiina Mashiro fondly, smiled, and said: "Then let's go to England, let's go!"

There will be military training soon, so the author Ji will try his best to take time to update.